Last Friday we shared our passion learning. It was a bit scary because we had to talk in front of the hole class. I felt nervous all of the groups had to share. We did it to see were every body was at most of the groups were finished. We are very proud of what we have accomplished me and my group
What we need to do next is we need to convince our principle
Ma te hira if we are a loud it at school and were we are a loud to ride it then we can give people rides I can imagine that being awesome. And that's what were going to do next
Last term we started passion projects me and two class mates thought of a wooden push go-kart
and this term we finished it. and I am really proud that we finished it if you want to now how to build a go-kart just read this book hope you like it
Last term we started these books for room 9 and we finished this term our story was a bout three kids having a treasure hunt and inside the treasure chest was shells. So me and a class mate write this story for our buddy's in room 9 and I hope my buddy loves it. My buddy's name is Che he loved my story he wanted to read my story twice that made me feel awesome and my buddy was cool he was reading his book and pointing to the words I like my buddy because he always stays on task.
yesterday we had to write a recount about what we did on the holidays this was my holiday the best thing was going for a swim at the beach.
On the holidays my sister, my mum and I went to my nan’s house in Whangarei. We went to the beach, played with the dog her name was Poppy. She was a good dog every time we took her to the beach she went crazy like a cut snake because there were other dogs around.
I had to paint the fence white it took ages. I had to paint every crack and line my poppa told me to stop because I did enough. So I went inside and my aunty said "lets go to the beach?" and I said "ok lets go!" so I zoomed
to the beach as fast as I could.
The waves were huge so I jumped in the sparkly water. The water was so nice and cool like ice. The sand was burning hot like lava my aunty said "it’s time to go home" so we started walking back it was nearly time to go back to Kaikohe.
A few days ago we started these Lego story's my story is about three kids that go in to the forest and Lucy gets lost. We used Lego to make these it was fun because we got to make our own story. The bast part about was making it. I hope you like my Lego story In the evening Chrissy,Josh and Lucy went for a walk in the spooky scary forest. It had colossal sized trees but Lucy got lost in the middle of nowhere. Because she was chasing a bird. The bird was glowing green And had big black feathers on its back.
When Lucy went missing she got captured by the wicked witch. The wicked witch was a mean witch. So she put Lucy in a steel cage with sharp nails pointing out. Lucy was so terrified she called for help “help!!!”. The mean witch said “no body can hear you” “hahaha you will never get out”.
Chrissy and Josh didn't know about this. They turned around and Lucy wasn't there. So Chrissy and Josh went looking for her. Finally they had found Lucy. Josh went and released Lucy from her cage. Chrissy sneaked up behind the witch and slayed the aggressive old wicked witch. They were never to be seen again...
This week my group started our passion learning we are building a go kart but first we had to research and find out about it here's is our learning journal witch has all our work. And I think we did good on co- operating together we would like to try harder and work in a team. I am looking forward to building this go kart because I think its going to be cool.
A few days ago I started this peace of writing and I think I tried my best to do this and I hope you like it too
WALT: Show not tell to describe and expand on one feature of our character
Once there lived a man taller than a 10 story building. His name was Ben His eyes were black as night and his hair was gold as the sun. Ben had big massive ears with craters in them, bugs could crawl into his ear, his ear wax was green which was a solid substance, he had ugly ear rings in his ears. His teeth were razor sharp he had no eyebrows because when he grew eyebrows they were huge and his nose was fat as a tree.
WALT show not tell in our writing We had to record ourselves on audio boo
A few days ago I started writing this story with Miss Smith, I think it's good and I hope you like it too.
try and guess what feeling this is if you can ?
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging His heart was pounding. He could feel his knees shaking he started to wonder what was coming. Was it big or small he started to shiver and shake. Trying to quench his mouth together so it wouldn't find him it felt like it was right behind him. His blood pressure dropped as he was sprinting he could hear the trees scuffling. Suddenly something touched him...
A whew days ago I started this story narrative writing I like he part when Christi eats the apple
The mysterious glowing
Christi was wandering thru the forest she had golden hair and was wearing a red t shirt,dark pants a leather jacket and some big black boots. The forest was big with massive tall trees and lakes these lakes were pitch black you couldn't see thru with
lots of colourful insects she had seen someone so she went up to it she was an old lady her name was Mary. Mary was wearing some pointy boots a black coat and gloves she gave Christi an apple the apple was glowing so she ate it but when Christi bit the apple she turned into a ugly old witch. Mary was a witch then Mary turned into a ferocious dragon and the dragon was green with big scales and a spiky back and a pointy tail somebody had to save her prince charming had to come and rescue her. So Christi waited and waited finally her prince charming came he had to kill the dragon so prince charming got out his sword and defeated the beast then Christi turned beautiful and Christi was so happy when she turned back to her normal self again so Christi carried on walking thru the forest.
Today in writing we made these story's to show we are playing hide and seek. And the part I like is when she gets closer and closer.
“Ready or not here I come.” I tried to find a spot “there ‘s one yes” as I heard great big foot steps like a giant oh no she’s close. I tried to be like a statue I was by tree’s so I hopped in the bush's trying not to make a noise my heart was pounding she was getting closer and closer. No one can find me I didn't make a noise whew she had gone yes I could move again I hid behind a tree then I started to run she kept getting closer. When I started to get hungry I could smell mum baking a cake I ran around the house as fast as I can trying to look for different places I could hear the bush's scuffling boo found you oh man. I win you lose I win you lose then I sprinted to my mum’s cake and munched it up delicious.
Today in tuhituhi we made this animation but we didn't get to finish it off so next time will have to finish it off and we had to make these to paint a picture in our heads. And I think the best part is when he goes in the factory.
‘’Go room 17’’ there i was thinking about my class on wednesday afternoon at tawaraunui doing assembly we were waiting for everybody to be quiet then we started with the girls doing there awesome dance next up were a group of boys doing the bongos i felt so proud of me and my class up on stage. And it was cool to be on stage because i got to to say something in our assembly I had to help give out the certificates and ask if any teachers had any notices I felt so nervous when i picked up the microphone because everybody was looking at me and could hear people clapping for us and cheering for us then we gave out the caught being goods I think our assembly was awesome because every was in it.
On Wednesday afternoon we went to assembly and we had to go on stage I felt nervous because every body was looking at me then some of the girls did a dance and. Some boys played the bongos and when I had to say do any kaiako have any panui I felt shy but no teachers had any notices so I went back and sat down then we said thank you for coming to room 17's assembly.