Monday, 28 July 2014

A whew days ago I started this story narrative writing I like he part when Christi eats the apple

The mysterious glowing
Christi was wandering thru the forest she had golden hair and was wearing a red t shirt,dark pants a leather jacket and some big black boots.  The forest was big with massive tall trees and lakes these lakes were pitch black you couldn't see thru  with
lots of colourful insects she had seen someone so she went up to it she was an old lady her name was Mary.  Mary was wearing some pointy boots a black coat and gloves she gave Christi an apple the apple was glowing so she ate it but when Christi bit the apple she turned into a ugly old witch.  Mary was a witch then Mary turned into a ferocious dragon and the dragon was green with big scales and a spiky back and a pointy tail somebody had to save her prince charming had to come and rescue her. So Christi waited and waited finally her prince charming came he had to kill the dragon so prince charming got out his sword and defeated the beast then Christi turned beautiful and Christi was so happy when she turned back to her normal self again so Christi carried on walking thru the forest.


  1. Kia ora Kara. I notice you like the part in your story when Christi eats the apple. My favourite part is when Mary turns into a ferocious green dragon. I love dragons - even bad ones - and I liked the language you used to describe the dragon in your story because I could picture her in my mind. Ka pai to mahi. from Mrs Morgan-French

  2. Thanks Miss Morgan French i liked when she ate the apple because she turns in to a witch