Friday, 29 August 2014

This week my group started our passion learning we are building a go kart but first we had to research and find out about it here's is our learning  journal witch has all our work.  And I think we did good on co- operating together we would like to try harder and work in a team.  I am looking forward to building this go kart because I think its going to be cool.

Wednesday, 13 August 2014

Ben The Giant

A few days ago I started this peace of writing and I think I tried my best to do this and I hope you like it too

WALT: Show not tell to describe and expand on one feature of our character

Once there lived a man taller than a 10 story building.  His name was Ben His eyes were black as night and his hair was gold as the sun.  Ben had big massive ears with craters in them, bugs could crawl into his ear, his ear wax was green which was a solid substance, he had ugly ear rings in his ears.  His teeth were razor sharp he had no eyebrows because when he grew eyebrows they were huge and his nose was fat as a tree.

Friday, 1 August 2014

My show don't tell

WALT show not tell in our writing We had to record ourselves on audio boo 

A few days ago I started writing this story with Miss Smith, I think it's good and I hope you like it too.

try and guess what feeling this is if you can ?

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

His heart was pounding.  He could feel his knees shaking he started to wonder what was coming.  Was it big or small he started to shiver and shake.  Trying to quench his mouth together so it wouldn't find him it felt like it was right behind him.  His blood pressure dropped as he was sprinting he could hear the trees scuffling.  Suddenly something touched him...